Response- Marijuana Legalization

My main comment i received in class was in relation to the specifics of what case studies and specific facts i might use. Also i was told to support my side more rather than try to stay as ambiguous as possible when presenting the facts of both sides. Both of these i have already incorporated in my paper and thought they were beneficial and in no way made me upset or full of rage when i was criticized. As always the biggest obstacle in this paper is to stay focused and remain scientific rather than relying on personal testimonies about the drugs effects.