Rhetorical Prospectus Response

I felt pretty confident and excited about my topic for this essay which is why I volunteered to go first. I admit I was nervous at first because I didn't know what to kind of reactions to expect from my peers and also because I wasn't completely sure how I wanted present the issue or whether I would be able to convey my perspective accurately. After reading my rhetorical prospectus I was open to and looking forward to what advise my peers had to offer. I knew that there were parts of my project that weren't clear or specific enough and it helped for others to listen and pick them out for me. For example, one of the classmates suggested that I specify what type of media I'm talking about and what specifically American culture is today when I talk about women being portrayed negatively through the media and in our culture today. Another piece of feedback that I appreciated was that I should add a specific case study relating to modern or American culture. That was a very helpful idea because I wasn't sure what exactly I was missing, and that was it. I also realized that I need to consider and address what the opposite view would be such as that "women could feel empowered also." Overall I was satisfied with the feedback I got and was much more confident and clear about how I was going to address my issue through this paper and structure it as well. I felt ready to go and excited because I actually know what I'm doing now! Thanks for all the help guys.